Trying out words, presentation ideas?

So, to go along with each image I wrote a little caption to explain, and compare both myself and my mothers childhood, like a little narrative.

I tried it with typed words first, and then with my own handwriting, just to see if it would have a different impact.

Really not sure if I like this at all. It doesn't have that right feel about it....

And with handwriting..

From just laying out the images like this, I have decided that I do really like the layout of a book with my photos. It would also make sense as it is an ongoing narrative.

Also, I like the look of the handwriting better, as it feels more personal, like its a photo album or a scrap book kind of thing, which also fits my work perfectly as it is a very personal project to me.

Sooo, decided !!! I want my book to appear like a little scrap book / family photo album.

:D